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  • @[email protected]
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    164 days ago

    Another take:

    She feels bad about it, wrote a incoherant babbling mess of run-on sentences and incoherant rants about your relationship, she then re-read it and found it to be disproportionately mean and possibly hurtful, She then shoved it all into an LLM and prompted:

    I’m breaking up with my boyfriend. This is all my natural heartfelt take on the situation <inserts text>, but I find the tone to be callous, angry, and hurtful. Can you please reword this to make the reader feel less attacked, possibly up to and including removing grievances, but at the same time making it clear that this decision is final and that I’d like to part ways amicably, and also that he’s not getting his dog back.

    • @[email protected]
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      104 days ago

      Top comment is about how to get a machine to word something raw and emotional that should have been done in person. Nobody wants to get broken up with, let alone with a script written by a robot. Your take is off putting.

      • @[email protected]
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        34 days ago

        Yet we’re perfectly cool with a card from a department store claiming Happy anniversary to my beautiful wife and I’m so glad that you’re such a good mother to our kids.

        Anyone that has a take that is not shoving a red hot poker up AI’s ass gets down voted.

        I’m not here for the upvotes. Carry on. And please don’t take it personally, I do hope you have a solid day.

        • @[email protected]
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          54 days ago

          We aren’t really cool with that though, people tend to write a longer personal note inside those cards.

    • @[email protected]
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      14 days ago

      She wants it reworded to be less hurtful but she’s keeping ‘his’ dog?

      She’d better start mentioning he kicked it or she just painted herself as… Well, not the worst but, like, really low… Ain’t no ‘amicable’ if you’re kidnapping the dog.